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WHAT THE READERS SAY – A SELECTION OF PAST COMMENTS

So well written…
04/06/06 By: Anonymous in USA
I never comment and particularly do not like blow job stories (lesbian, ok) BUT this story had me rolling in the aisles. I felt like I was actually there. What are you doing hiding in Literotica? You should be writing mainstream. You really have a lot of talent! You go, girl!

Not just this one but ALL!
11/04/05 By: Anonymous in USA
You are a gifted writer. One who is able to use “do” words in- stead of “tell”.  Thanks!

Cool
11/01/05 By:JamesSD

You have an interesting style, and a definite flair for the erotic. Nice work.

Really Great vivid steaming fantasy!
10/30/05 By walkingeagle in missouri
This is a really vivid steming little fantsy! I could feel and ‘see’ her words, and they definitely effected me—

Great Story!
12/07/05 By chronotrigger

I really enjoyed reading this story. I especially enjoyed the playful relationship between the characters. Thank you for a great story.

Great story!
01/01/06 By: Anonymous in California
Excellent story. The plot development was good. Not too brief, just about right. And the sex was awesome. Great descriptions and action.
Nice one!
01/26/06 By: Hercules_unleashed in UK
Being English I can appreciate the nuances that you put into your tale. Keep up the good work, I love your style.

Fantastic writing
02/07/06 By: Docno in Tennessee, USA
Another fantastic story, I read a couple of other stories of yours on another site and they were awsum, keep up the good work.

Superb
11/26/05 By: WarriorWoman in USA
O…m..g. This was fabulous! Truly one of the best-written stories so far. You are a wonderful writer. My god. What a way to leave us. LOL. Definitely wanting more.

Exquisite
11/15/05 By: Anonymous
Very good, very tempting.

Very well written
11/11/05 By: Anonymous in USA
I have read a lot of erotica and this story is among the best I have read. Thanks, keep it up, I will be looking for more.

Beautifully written
01/06/06 By: Anonymous in Austin, Texas, U.S.A.
Your story is beautifully written with intimate detail. I’m not sure what the future holds, but if it is all written with the same detail and class as this portion, I will be looking forward to it.

a fun read
04/06/06 By: SLC-Ohio in the theater
Enjoyable. Believable? Who cares. You did a nice job of spinning this story

Loved the story

Posted: 2006/2/23 7:23  by Anonymous

Well written and inventive. An easy 10 points to award but much harder to write for. Off to read your others now

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